Electric strings
electric lust
beating to the sound of dedication
beating to the sound desperation
beating to the sound of our hearts
as the floors buckle and shake
we jump and quake
waves of inspiration
waves of colorful eyes
jumping back decades
jumping back stories of crusades
as we make our way outside
the city lights block out our speculation
speculation of the stars
through speeding cars
i admire the eyes, brighter than shining stars
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Author:
Aals (
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I'm not sure I prefer eyes over stars but electricity has changed the world. Nice.
the eyes represent the people in the city, saying people can be brighter than stars, 🙂 thankyou. i appreciate your feedback
Oh yes, how silly of me. I was focused on how you cannot see the stars at night in the city from the glare of the lights. I like your idea.
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lovely poem!!
thankyou<3
Great write
thankyouu
Welcome
Awesome poem, enjoyed it very much!!!
🙂
I could hear the noise outside after the raising of the nerves inside...
beautifully written...
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