Love Hurts when its a unexplainable feeling
love hurts when the one you love not on the same page as you
love hurts when you look in my eyes you see pain and hurt
love hurts when you love one cant say "i love you 2"
love hurts when you do everything and anything for your love one
love hurts when your love one don't appreciate you
love hurts when you want only him and no one else
love hurts when the love of your life wants someone else
love hurts when love doesn't exist anymore
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Complicated Lover (Pseudonym) (
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Great write
Thank you
Welcome
Hi,
I know what you want to say here I have some suggetions and hope you can consider..
Hurts when (and)its a(n) unexplainable feeling
love hurts when the one you love(is) not on the same page as you
love hurts when you look in my eyes(and what's only there is only pain and hurt) you see pain and hurt
love hurts when (The one) you love one (ommit 'one' here)can(')t say "i love you 2"
love hurts when you do everything and anything for your love one ( and he doesn't see or return any)
love hurts when your love one don't appreciate you
love hurts when you want only him and no one else
love hurts when the love of your life wants someone else
love hurts when love doesn't exist anymore (.)
Gel(critic)
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