Deep Down

All systems aligned and checked for dive.

But how deep should we go?

To bottom of my heart?

The depths of my very soul?

How deep are you willing to look, to fix the problems we’ve ignored?

Are you willing to go the distance?



I am, if you are.


  • Quemis

    • JustABird

      Not sure if this is a terrible review or not. :/

      • Quemis

        Oh wow, the site did not notify me of this empty comment.

        Think of it as I was speechless in admiration! Haha,

        Really though, great little piece.

        : )

      • Garry

        Love the starting point. Really good to hear how people get started on a poem.
        I think this also worked out really well.
        Evocative, mixtures of tentative hopefulness. Realky enjoyed it.

        • JustABird

          Thank you so much.

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