my wife's shopping day...

P.H.Rose

The wind blows through this stationary vehicle line,
sitting here waiting too long for your return time.
With your grandson sat and not a happy chap,
too long been sat in his seat and shoulder strap.
Ten minutes I'll only be was relayed to me,
Seems that time has now froze to thee.
Just getting a bit of shopping, I won't be long,
but it seems an age since you've been gone.
A hundred different cars have come and go,
some spaces empty but still a steady flow.
Five more minutes and that's your lot,
a walk home or wait at yonder bus stop.
Just at the breaking point of no return,
you walk from shop ,with a bag laden arm.
With a smile as wide as our river's estuary,
You've finally bough clothes as Is your destiny..

  • Author: P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 14th, 2016 05:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: I love my wife but she has a very big Problem in her life,she cannot pick clothes. One day we three went shopping, me and My grandson waited in the car, she said, "I'll only be fives mins", wait here.. Longest five of my life, grandson was Not happy.... We nearly left her to get The bus home.....just kidding !!!
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  • WriteBeLight

    I understand your impatience in this piece. We have all been there! HA HA

    • P.H.Rose

      Ha ha thanks WBL,
      To be truthful I'm use
      To is but the little lad
      Wasn't.... thanks

      • WriteBeLight

        Welcome!

      • gelyn

        hi,

        I'm laughing while reading this.. you almost loss your temper here.

        the lines that mark on me are htese

        Just at the breaking point of no return,
        you walk from shop ,with a bag laden arm.
        With a smile as wide as our river's estuary,
        You've finally bough clothes as Is your destiny..


        well done

        Gel

        • P.H.Rose

          Thank you Gel,
          I still love her to
          Bits... I would imagine
          There's stuff she doesn't
          Like about me....in fact
          I'm absolutely positive
          There is.....

        • SharonMoemise

          Great poem. Lots of humor in it, I could read on and on. Great job

          • P.H.Rose

            Thank you Sharon for
            Those kind words..

          • Tony36

            Love this poem

            • P.H.Rose

              Thank you so much Tony

              • Tony36

                Welcome

              • Christina8

                All of us say "I'll only be ten minutes dear." You men are saints! Very well written poem!

                • P.H.Rose

                  Thank you chrissy



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