The moon creeps on the day to strike fear in those who hide there sins in the depths of their souls
For thos who have no fear shall rise from the shadows and take your place and show this place what its like to feel each others pain so go and terrorize thos that bring pain on thos who are saine and show no shame from where they came so go now and set thos who deserve to be free from this disasters place where he shall not me be name came to rule and make them shed tears for the sins they made...
By:Juan
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Juan C. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is my first poem and im not sure if i could end it like that put plzz let me know what u think of it. Also i don't really understand what a poem is suppose to be hope u enjoy.
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Plzz leave comments of what u think about it so i could make better ones thanks.
Hey I like your poem it has a good meaning of fear and pain and it make sure sense:) if you can please check out my poems too thank you ~~
A poem is what you make of it - there are a variety of formats, and some freestyle ones don't follow any rules. This is the beauty of poetry - it is freedom in words; to express yourself, fantasies, thoughts, emotions, experiences, you name it. I like your first piece; I like the rhythm, you can tell you have great potential and I'm sure the more you write the more your style will develop and you will find your forte xx
Thank you
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