As the shadow's lurk in the alleys waiting, raged with anger for those who's sins have gonna unpunished to drag them to the depths of the darkest place, that no being alive has ever been to, for when you enter you are no longer alive. Your soul is stuck in the darkness for all eternity to be torcherd and never know what happiness and love is. To be alone with never seeing light of day ever. As soon as you think its the end and no way out, you open your eyes and see from a far a bright white light thats reaches out and as you try to reach for it the drakness pulls and drags you to the depths past the gate's of hell.
By: Juan
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Author:
Juan C. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is my second poem still learning on trying to make them good hope you enjoy. Also im not sure if allies is the right word sorry.
- Category: Sad
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Alleys...allies are like your sidekicks or people who are on your side...never question yourself or hold back when u write..I see potential in your writing for sure..just get rid of your inhibitions
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This is a good poem keep it up:)
Great write
Great poem!
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