P.H.Rose

First new day...

First new day

I want to tell a secret
I want to say out loud
I left my town in Georgia
Fled here way down south
Left that place of no hope
And found a place of joy
A place where I am happy
And had my baby boy
Freed my cluttered mind
Freed my cluttered soul
I know just where I am now
It feels I've now come home.

Comments5

  • WriteBeLight

    Happy ending well written.

    • P.H.Rose

      Thank you WBL

    • notapoet

      Awesome piece, I really loved it...NAP

      • P.H.Rose

        Thank you so much
        NAP. I'm over the moon
        That you've made it a
        Favourite....

      • Christina8

        Well done. Love the happy ending!--Christina

        • P.H.Rose

          Thank you Chrissy

        • Tony36

          Great write

          • P.H.Rose

            Thank you Tony

            • Tony36

              Welcome

            • Augustus

              Nice short story in a poem.

              • P.H.Rose

                Thanks Augustus
                I knew you'd get it..



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