This pain is so intense
I never thought I would have to bear
This enormous feeling of emptiness
knowing you are no longer there
I try to ignore the dead silence
that endlessly screams your name
but my efforts to shut it out
Is just a painful silly game
Your time with me has expired
our journey has come to a close
to think you would be here forever
Was just selfish of me I suppose
But now I must accept
and face the painful fact
that the knowledge of our fate
is never really exact
So now I must face my fear
and say my final goodbye
Continue to be strong
and pretend not to cry
I know you are safe
and not suffering anymore
as you step across the threshold
of heavens golden front door
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As an old guy with 4th stage cancer I am really touched by this. Very well done.
This saddens me greatly, my thoughts and healing prayers go out to you and yours....
Really appreciate the thoughts and prayers.
Wonderful tribute to your friend
Thank you Tony, appreciate you very much.
Welcome
Very well done. Loving tribute. I know how this feels.
Thank you chrissy8
Oh my lord NAP,
This is superb..
By an absolute
Country mile
My favourite
So far on this
Site....I love it...
Thank you so much for the kind words and I am honored that you consider it one of your fav's. Much love to you and yours...
And the same to you..
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Button....
P.s.
There are so
Many wonderful
Lines in it...
Brilliant....
very touching.
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