Sister

Tony36

Sister I see the monsters have gotten to you

They beat you

Ripped off your clothes

Took what they wanted

 

I will make them pay

I will hunt them down

I will beat them so bad

Their blood will flows like a mighty river

 

Yes sister

These monster

These wolves

These beasts

I will find them

I will destroy them

For what they have done to you

For what they have taken from you

 

They may run

They can't hide

For they can not mess with one of my family

And not expect to pay a heavy price

 

Sister you know

When I get pissed off

I get pissed off

 

Those that have done this to you

Have sparked that fire

And have set me in motion

 

Last thing I will say

May God save them

Because

Once I find them

Nobody will save them

Nobody will stop me

From punishing them for their dirty deeds

Death is what they deserve

Death is what I will give them

  • Author: Tony36 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 21st, 2016 12:33
  • Comment from author about the poem: Not having a sister myself this is just a thought about how I might react if I did have a sister and how I might react.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 36
  • User favorite of this poem: Seanachaidh.
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Comments9

  • elsiewarrenswords

    A lot of passion in this - I was pleasantly surprised to see this is not based on true life! So well done😃 Unpleasant but very good!

    • Tony36

      Thank you

    • Daniel

      Wow powerful stuff!

      • Tony36

        Thank you

      • WriteBeLight

        I could see the character you imagined shaking his fist as I read this! Very different for you Tony and a well done poem about sheer anger!

        • Tony36

          Thank you

          • WriteBeLight

            Welcome.

          • willyweed

            remind me to never piss you off buddie!
            powerful write Tony I like it...a lot. ww

            • Tony36

              Thank you

            • Augustus

              Tony, you have a gift to be able to put yourself in another's shoes and imagine their emotions and responses.

              • Tony36

                Thank you

              • P.H.Rose

                Another side to
                You Tony....
                I like it.....
                Passion in every
                Word..... well done!!

                • Tony36

                  Thank you

                • Christina8

                  Glad this was not based on a true event but nice to see another side of you. Really great write!

                  • Tony36

                    Thank you

                  • Seanachaidh

                    Intense and passionate raw realistic poem = Good job

                    • Tony36

                      Thank You

                    • SabreLi

                      A brilliant piece here, Tony. I have sisters myself and the world would be a better place if everybody could think about how they would react if something evil befell one of their own. Great work xx

                      • Tony36

                        Thank you



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