Sister I see the monsters have gotten to you
They beat you
Ripped off your clothes
Took what they wanted
I will make them pay
I will hunt them down
I will beat them so bad
Their blood will flows like a mighty river
Yes sister
These monster
These wolves
These beasts
I will find them
I will destroy them
For what they have done to you
For what they have taken from you
They may run
They can't hide
For they can not mess with one of my family
And not expect to pay a heavy price
Sister you know
When I get pissed off
I get pissed off
Those that have done this to you
Have sparked that fire
And have set me in motion
Last thing I will say
May God save them
Because
Once I find them
Nobody will save them
Nobody will stop me
From punishing them for their dirty deeds
Death is what they deserve
Death is what I will give them
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Author:
Tony36 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Not having a sister myself this is just a thought about how I might react if I did have a sister and how I might react.
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A lot of passion in this - I was pleasantly surprised to see this is not based on true life! So well done😃 Unpleasant but very good!
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Wow powerful stuff!
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I could see the character you imagined shaking his fist as I read this! Very different for you Tony and a well done poem about sheer anger!
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Welcome.
remind me to never piss you off buddie!
powerful write Tony I like it...a lot. ww
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Tony, you have a gift to be able to put yourself in another's shoes and imagine their emotions and responses.
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Another side to
You Tony....
I like it.....
Passion in every
Word..... well done!!
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Glad this was not based on a true event but nice to see another side of you. Really great write!
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Intense and passionate raw realistic poem = Good job
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A brilliant piece here, Tony. I have sisters myself and the world would be a better place if everybody could think about how they would react if something evil befell one of their own. Great work xx
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