Have you ever woke-up before the sun greets
Our home and sense a newness/freshness, that
Feels so unnaturally uplifting? An inhaling the very
Breath of Almighty God, directly instead of indirect
Passing exhalations as in from the mouths of men.
A foreshadow, of that long-awaited tomorrow before
The mass awakening of all that noisy chatter, mostly
About nothing important chasing time while it watched
Them in a questioning mindset: are they aware of today’s
Presence in fulfilled promises, they breath/move inside of.
Seeing in a divine understanding way, life’s connective
Inseams of thread-less acknowledge-able sutures, that
Invisibly, unify-ably, breaths in that put in place inclusive
Common ground, in celebrating the inculcated words of
Creations creator’s shareable selfless love.
Have you ever woke-up before the sun greets
Our home and sense a newness/freshness, that
Feels so unnaturally uplifting? An inhaling the very
Breath of Almighty God, directly instead of indirect
Passing exhalations as in from the mouths of men.
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Author:
Thumping Heart (Pseudonym) (
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Comments1
All of your work goes way over my head.
I hope that saying so is a compliment.
I understand that your trying to say something about the nature of time, divinity and determinism in a few of your works, but, despite my best efforts, I am not well versed enough to understand some of your metaphors and overall meaning.
I have noticed that all of your works have this same formula.
Are they all some kind of Tai Chi thing?
My lack of understanding almost makes your works seem lovecraftian and cultish to me, which while I think is really cool, I am pretty sure you were not trying to convey.
I would like to say however, that not every piece has to be a means to an end. I commend you on your structure and word choice. It is vast and interesting and surprising.
Keep up the good work, maybe one day I will get it. When I learn more.
Good job!
I truly appreciate honesty in the absolute highest degree and you my friend are just that my mind does not exist on this sphere but walks somewhat ever so slightly above the plain as it tends to cue on the smaller point in life's big picture always searching for that first brush stroke because I have found when one finds that the big picture takes on a much deeper meaning and true enlightenment happens in a very extraordinary uplifting breathtaking way....You my friend and fellow poet are well on your way because first and foremost a true poet is so insightfully honest....So please do not feel bad or disappointed in your present lack of understanding this work it will come....So well appreciated, Thumping Heart
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