The Land Of Hope But Not Quite.

kevin browne

look at the stars to see if I fit sorrow

the twinkle in my eye has faded too soon

so another day that is called tomorrow

and that's the day I look to up the moon

pinch is 2 fingers to see who I am

find out with a bruise that came at night

houses and actions are built like prams

and found the land of hope but not quite.

 

  • Author: kingkev101 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 2nd, 2017 06:08
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  • willyweed

    This is very good Kevin ww

    • kevin browne

      Thanks ww. I appreciate your thoughts.

    • Christina8

      Very good poem. Made me think.--Christina

    • Augustus

      As I read your poem I get the feeling that things don't seem the same any longer. What will we see tomorrow?
      Lots packed in a few well crafted lines.



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