Hurts

Phoenix8523

My heart,

It beats;

My soul,

It hums;

I feel everything…

Deeper…

Than anyone.

 

My mind,

It fails;

My body,

Collapses;

I know everything…

Deeper…

Than anyone.

 

From deep inside

To far outside,

I feel it all

Complete.

Which one is worse?

I cannot tell;

They hurt the same to me.

  • Author: Phoenix (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 2nd, 2017 17:02
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 32
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Comments5

  • willyweed

    pain is pain physical or emotional we hurt from it all. another wonderful write > write on! ww

    • Phoenix8523

      Thank you for your feedback! -- phoenix

    • Augustus

      Sweet. I like it.

      • Phoenix8523

        Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it. -- phoenix

      • Daisyblue

        This touched me deeper than anything I've read lately. It's so honest. Thank you for the feelings.

        • Phoenix8523

          Thank you so much for your comment. I'm happy you were touched. -- phoenix

        • rrodriguez

          Very reflective... and insightful in its realism. Pain is a catalyst to many emotions. Well written friend... healing can be gain through writing and sharing.

        • Francesco

          Wonderful! Love the structure and the short phrases.
          It keeps you on your toes and catches you off guard at the same time.
          Thank you for sharing.

          • Phoenix8523

            Thank you for your comment. -- phoenix



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