My heart,
It beats;
My soul,
It hums;
I feel everything…
Deeper…
Than anyone.
My mind,
It fails;
My body,
Collapses;
I know everything…
Deeper…
Than anyone.
From deep inside
To far outside,
I feel it all
Complete.
Which one is worse?
I cannot tell;
They hurt the same to me.
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Author:
Phoenix (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 2nd, 2017 17:02
- Category: Reflection
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Comments5
pain is pain physical or emotional we hurt from it all. another wonderful write > write on! ww
Thank you for your feedback! -- phoenix
Sweet. I like it.
Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it. -- phoenix
This touched me deeper than anything I've read lately. It's so honest. Thank you for the feelings.
Thank you so much for your comment. I'm happy you were touched. -- phoenix
Very reflective... and insightful in its realism. Pain is a catalyst to many emotions. Well written friend... healing can be gain through writing and sharing.
Wonderful! Love the structure and the short phrases.
It keeps you on your toes and catches you off guard at the same time.
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for your comment. -- phoenix
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