Mr Pain...The unwanted guest..
Oh !! You sneaky devil ado,
Down my back, I know it's you.
A thought you'd left, some time ago,
But you've come back and won't let go.
Since your return you've come back stronger,
Started in my neck and now moved down yonder.
Arms, feet and down my legs you run,
You've even now reached each cheek of my bum.
What shall I do to get rid of you this time,
The pills doc gave, won't keep you in line.
I think I'll use, a more natural cure,
And with a little luck, I'll then show you the door.
Mr pain is defiantly not a guest you want visiting.
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Author:
P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 4th, 2017 09:08
- Comment from author about the poem: I've suffered with a worn back For some years, it's now moved To my arms,hands and legs.. I would imagine I'm not alone ....
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Comments5
your poem is great and rhymes so well. sorry you're in pain thought
I hope you find relieve.
Thank you for your
Comments WW.
Its really weird at
The moment it is
In my right elbow
When i drive...
Makes me very
Short tempered
My wife is fed
up of me ha ha
I don't blame her....so am I
good write. ww
I feel your pain!!! Back pain is horrible, as is all pain, especially in the rear! You can get that from kids, though....:) Great poem. Feel Better!
Thank you WBL
Welcome!
Awesome write
Thanks Tony
Welcome
A wonderful rhyming poem. So sorry to hear you are in such pain! I hope your natural cure works. Get well soon!
Thank you so
Much Chrissy
A great poem, hope you find a cure for your pain. I loved the ending !
Thank you Daniel
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