First

SunSearcher

A smell faintly drifts by

And suddenly I'm taken back in time.

To a time of adolescent uncertainty 

But I fell for you whole heartedly.

 

With my senses I taste 

Something strangely familiar.

I think and think with such haste

Until I remember the smile of your face.

 

I gave to you my all

My heart, body, and soul.

Not a day goes by that I regret 

Because the best of you I can never forget. 

He is my oldest and of him I am so proud 

This crazy plan that God had we will never figure out.

He is intelligent, handsome, and caring 

I am so blessed by him, so I thank you for sharing. 

 

 

 

  • Author: SunSearcher (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 5th, 2017 06:48
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • rrodriguez

    I read and it has subtle twist to it. It leads one way and surprise you at the end.

  • willyweed

    this does have a certain something to it, nicely done. ww

  • Tony36

    Wonderful write

  • Christina8

    Poem very well done. Has a twist to it. Enjoyed reading!

  • WriteBeLight

    Smells, food, music and more can spark memories! Very scent-sative poem! Beautiful.

    • SunSearcher

      Haha nice play on words! Thanks!

      • WriteBeLight

        You are very welcome!

      • SunSearcher

        Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments. I may one day add to this one. Sometimes it just pours out for a few minutes. Funny how life molds you without you even knowing.



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