Terry
Your name is
A symphony score
to my ears
sang softly;
I hear its gentle timbre
When I think of you.
Persevere
Gentle breeze
In the sun's pale light
I'm at ease
gentle peace
Encouraging me to fight
Yes, fight, not to cease
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Author:
rrodriguez (
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- Comment from author about the poem: These two poems are very unique in that both are dedicated to two special ladies, my wife and my niece. The Shadorma is a Spanish poetic form made up of a stanza of six lines (sestet) with no set rhyme scheme. It is a syllabic poem with a meter of 3/5/3/3/7/5.
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Comments5
Great write love them both
Thank you Tony. Your kind words encourage me.
Welcome
tiempos muy bonitos dos. ww
Beautifully done. Thanks for the additional explanation. I love to learn new things about poetry!
very nice! I too very much like the explanation that accompanies these poems. Always looking to learn something new and interesting! -- phoenix
Thanks for the Shadorma lesson. It give us a challange. Your wife and niece are lucky.
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