Two Shadorma Poems

rrodriguez

Terry

Your name is

A symphony score

to my ears

sang softly;

I hear its gentle timbre

When I think of you.

 

Persevere

Gentle breeze

In the sun's pale light

I'm at ease

gentle peace

Encouraging me to fight

Yes, fight, not to cease

 

  • Author: rrodriguez (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 5th, 2017 09:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: These two poems are very unique in that both are dedicated to two special ladies, my wife and my niece. The Shadorma is a Spanish poetic form made up of a stanza of six lines (sestet)  with no set rhyme scheme.  It is a syllabic poem with a meter of 3/5/3/3/7/5.
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Comments5

  • Tony36

    Great write love them both

    • rrodriguez

      Thank you Tony. Your kind words encourage me.

      • Tony36

        Welcome

      • willyweed

        tiempos muy bonitos dos. ww

      • WriteBeLight

        Beautifully done. Thanks for the additional explanation. I love to learn new things about poetry!

      • Phoenix8523

        very nice! I too very much like the explanation that accompanies these poems. Always looking to learn something new and interesting! -- phoenix

      • Augustus

        Thanks for the Shadorma lesson. It give us a challange. Your wife and niece are lucky.



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