Horizon Ahead

WriteBeLight



Horizon Ahead: A Video Poem Presentation

  • Author: WriteBeLight (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 8th, 2017 07:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: All was going along just fine, until I was given the responsibility of a challenge, and how I came through that challenge learning that you have to dive in and sink or swim.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 27
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  • Tony36

    Awesome write, struggles in life is like lifting weights. It is the resistance upon your muscles that help build you up. The struggles we face in life build up our spiritual muscle, to help make us better people

    • WriteBeLight

      Very well put Tony! Nice metaphor using the weight and muscles. Excellent and thanks for your very kind input!

      • Tony36

        Welcome

      • Christina8

        wow, it looks like you came through a challenge with your head not only above water but running! Inspirational! Christina

        • WriteBeLight

          Thanks Christina! I am in a great place now, but always on the lookout for signs that I need to be ready for anything! A lot of people are depending on me to help keep the company afloat! It is great to be needed in that way, in what you do to make a living...:) I know as your work as a nurse, you too must have faced many challenges. Your family, I am sure, benefits from your compassion and experience. Thanks again!

          • Christina8

            You're welcome. I also wanted to thank you for your kind words. No doubt your family feels the same!

            • WriteBeLight

              Thanks again.

            • ron parrish aka wordman

              beautiful poem,and the illustration was super !

              • WriteBeLight

                Thank you Wordman. This one was a long time in the works..:)

              • Dford1

                Impressive!

                • WriteBeLight

                  Thanks so much! I appreciate it.

                • Augustus

                  What a beautiful metaphor.

                  • WriteBeLight

                    Thanks so much Augustus!



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