Lower planes of life.

CaitEva

I lurk around the lower planes,

 

in an attempt to light the unlit candles of curiosity with my energies flames,

 

in the lower planes people often feel shame,

 

and they look for someone else to blame for the person they've became,

 

they're unaware that the smoke from the candle they once had lit,

 

it clouds their mind and treacles out projecting their pain,

 

they use externals as a way to gain material happiness but they do it all in vain.

 

and that's a shame.

  • Author: CaitEva (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 11th, 2017 00:20
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Comments2

  • Tony36

    Great write, keep writing

    • CaitEva

      Thank you 🙂 Xx

      • Tony36

        Welcome

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks for sharing LARA ~ it is true what you say that LOWER PLANE PEOPLE ~ do feel shame and are often unaware that they are to blame for their status quo. In my experience there is no "inner" happiness in "externals" any happiness is superficial. The only way to true release and true happiness is to aspire to Higher Planes but it's never easy ! Yours BRIAN (UK)

        • CaitEva

          yes 🙂 vibrating higher. It's hard to stay at a higher frequency, but once you're there in the midst of it, feeling it, it's amazing! Thankyou

          ps. My name is Caitlin. ''laralove'' is just the username i chose to use 🙂

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks CAITLIN (nice name !) YES getting ones life vibes tunes into a higher frequency takes discipline and it makes all the ARTS so much more meaningful. One is able to appreciate Classical Art # Music & Literature. The trouble is (in the UK) a lot of TV and Pop Media and Entertainment is aimed at an audience occupying lower planes and they loose the capacity to sit through a symphony concert ~ appreciate fine art and poetry and literature. On MPS there are some Poets who post Sonnets & Acrostics & Haiku etc and Poetry that scans and has a consistent rhyming pattern etc. Some of the postings are PROSE which is OK if it punctuated ~ but at the same time we have to recognise that MODERN POETRY is anarchic and breaks all the rules of Grammar ~ Spelling and Classical poetic form. Mine is a mixture to have Universal Appeal (it\'s a MAN thing !) Thanks for being my MPS Friend and for positive comment on two of my Poems ! Yours BRIAN



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