slit her wrist
and her thighs
fake a smile
and dry her eyes
welcome to her world of lies
her world of pain
where everything she loves
goes down the drain
she wants to leave the world behind
she can't go on much longer
she's sorry she feels this way
she never intended
to hurt anyone
but she just can't hold on
and bear this pain anymore
goodbye world
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Author:
berdnt_victoria (
Offline) - Published: January 13th, 2017 11:50
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When we're too tired to fight. I tried this path more than twice and my daughter's a recovering cutter. This is when we need to hunker down and ride it out, nothing lasts forever. So sad, but very well written! -- phoenix
Thank you. I'm still working on trying to stop but I guess I'm doing an okay job.
Great poem although very difficult topic. You did a great job with the message. But, hold on and keep writing to get the feelings down on paper. It helps.
Thank you! I've been writing a lot to get all my feelings out.. it helps sometimes but other times I feel like giving up.. I haven't yet though and I'm working on getting better..
Keep hanging on! We, and I am here. We and I appreciate your writing!
Thank you! Thats what I needed to hear.. I just posted another poem. I hope you'll read it.
Will do!
Wow! Very powerful poem! I hope your doing okay.
Thank you! And I'm doing a little better.
It's really beautiful poem. Overflow of powerful feelings. Loved it
Thank you! I had a lot of emotions going through me when I wrote this poem.
That's good please read mine also
I will.
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