Rhythmic sequences of water droplets
rain falling like fallen angels
demons
beating on your window
begging you to let them in
instead you stare off into space
not where the stars wonder
but into the space beside you
into the space inside you
both where that puzzle piece should be
but is lost in this monstrous sea
the rain wants to fill your heart
don’t let the demons in
no ones fault but yours
the alternative is positivity
to escape the constant monstrosity
tearing
blaring
of your heart ripping in two
being held together with nothing but glue
where did your glow go ?
what happened to the rain beating to sound of music
the only sound your soul can decipher
what happened to the meaning of rhythmic
to the meaning of Angels
crying for you
when it gets too bad to glue
raindrops beating on your window
begging you to let them in
so they can help you feel again
so they can help you see again
so your tears can fall
just to be lost in the thousands of water droplets
let it in
cry again
feel the rain
take it in
let it wash the pain away
but don’t float away.
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Author:
Aals (
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- Category: Spiritual
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I loved the structure and melodic flow of this beautiful piece, a real pleasure to read, great write Aals.....
AWEE THANKYOU
Wow such a beautiful poem! Love the rhythm! ~Bella
thankyou darling !
Often we focus on the negative. Like the rain analogy.
it ruins us, at least me, if i think negatively then negative things happen.
It happens without my realizing it. My wife will often say, "why so negative?" and I am surprised by her question. My childhood was not all that great. That may have something to do with it.
I had an awful childhood as well, still fighting. But i have faith i'll get through it. Thats all i can do right now. I grew up with a narcissist, so it was always "you can't do this even if you tried", or "your too weak". So I started to believe it, I gave myself limits, as did that person for me. But i got out of that situation mostly, they had a deadly grip on me. Now i have no limits, and I'm pushing myself harder then I ever have.
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