what happened,
to that young girl
who use to be,
so happy and carefree
what happened,
to that young girl
who wasn't scared,
of trusting in you
what happened,
to that young girl
who wouldn't put that blade,
to her skin
what happened,
to that young girl
who didn't have,
all these scars
what happened,
to that young girl
who wasn't scared,
of you
what happened,
to that young girl
who could easily,
open up to you
and what happened,
to that young girl
who didn't think,
about suicide
well that young girl,
was slowly breaking
but no one could see that,
because she would hide it
and that young girl,
has slowly disappeared
from the world,
around her
and there's no finding,
that young girl
cause she's been gone,
far to long
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Author:
berdnt_victoria (
Offline) - Published: January 18th, 2017 09:12
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Comments5
While this is quite dark, it is a very good write. And I think that some people could relate to it all too much. It's nice to see people actually write things like this because some are too scared of being judged for it. Again, amazing write.
Thank you so much! I've been writing poems for almost a year now!
Well you are a very good author
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The young girl is always there and you will find her again. It is unfortunate that abuse, etc. can change such a sweet soul. But, you have the strength as a strong young woman to keep ahold of the young girl's hand. Great job on your poem 🙂
Thank you! I hope one day I'll find her..
You will. I found mine!
Wonderful poem! I can relate. ~Bella
Thank you!
Great write
This is a good poem, and you'll find that young girl someday. 🙂
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