berdnt_victoria

What Happened?

what happened,

to that young girl

who use to be,

so happy and carefree

 

what happened,

to that young girl

who wasn't scared,

of trusting in you

 

what happened,

to that young girl

who wouldn't put that blade,

to her skin

 

what happened,

to that young girl

who didn't have,

all these scars

 

what happened,

to that young girl

who wasn't scared,

of you

 

what happened,

to that young girl

who could easily,

open up to you

 

and what happened,

to that young girl

who didn't think,

about suicide

 

well that young girl,

was slowly breaking

but no one could see that,

because she would hide it

 

and that young girl,

has slowly disappeared

from the world,

around her

 

and there's no finding,

that young girl

cause she's been gone,

far to long

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments5

  • Tris Eaton

    While this is quite dark, it is a very good write. And I think that some people could relate to it all too much. It's nice to see people actually write things like this because some are too scared of being judged for it. Again, amazing write.

    • berdnt_victoria

      Thank you so much! I've been writing poems for almost a year now!

      • Tris Eaton

        Well you are a very good author

      • 1 more comment

      • WriteBeLight

        The young girl is always there and you will find her again. It is unfortunate that abuse, etc. can change such a sweet soul. But, you have the strength as a strong young woman to keep ahold of the young girl's hand. Great job on your poem :)

        • berdnt_victoria

          Thank you! I hope one day I'll find her..

          • WriteBeLight

            You will. I found mine!

          • My_Brain

            Wonderful poem! I can relate. ~Bella

          • Tony36

            Great write

          • Christina8

            This is a good poem, and you'll find that young girl someday. :-)



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