Terry dailey

WATERED DOWN

THE RAIN  HITS MY HEAD AND RUNS DOWN MY BACK.  NO COMPLAINING IS SAID WHILE EACH RAINDROP ATTACKS . MY MIND FELT THE RAIN AND THE THRILL IT DELIVERS.  IT MELTS THROUGH MY BRAIN WITH EACH CHILL AND EACH SHIVER.  IT REMINDS  ME OF LIFE AND LIVEING AGAIN.  THE END OF SUCH  STRIFE THATS WORTH WINNING MY FRIEND.  ITS PAINFULLY KNOWING TO FORGIVE THE FORGETNESS.  SO RAIN  KEEP ON BLOWING I LIVE WITH YOUR WETTNESS

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  • WriteBeLight

    Ha Ha. Love the last line. Great job Hippy4free!

    • Terry dailey

      Thank you very much... I like throwing n surprise on such simplicity it gets people close then kapow... The landmine blows lol.. Im honored by your comment.

      • WriteBeLight

        Ha Ha. That is great! Thanks.



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