It was a year
ago today
that God called my
Daddy away
Hello Daddy
Can you hear me?
Sorry ‘bout when
you last saw me
It wasn’t you
that made me mad
I was hurting
and feeling sad
I could’ve stopped
not slammed the door
and said I Love
You just once more
But I didn’t, I
just kept going
All my guilt and
grief now showing
I wish that I
could take it back
I’m told that you
understand that
I dream of you
most ev’ry night
Wondering if
you know my plight
Love you Daddy
with all my heart
Writing now, my
hope to impart
Hear me Daddy?
I love you so!
See you when it’s
my time to go
- Author: Phoenix (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: January 25th, 2017 14:26
- Comment from author about the poem: Take the time to say I LOVE YOU! God knows it may be your last opportunity.
- Category: Family
- Views: 28
Comments3
A heart-wrenching read Phoenix - - regret visits us all at times - you phrase it's result very clearly in these lines. Thank you for posting it.
Much appreciated -- phoenix
I feel he hears you only because that is what I truly believe as it relates to me. I am sorry for your loss. Beautiful and heartfelt poem to a poignant anniversary.
Thank you very much -- phoenix
WOW! I really don't have the words to express how this moved me but I think Damaged Souls comment sums it up. Just an amazing write, my heart goes out to you my friend.
Thank you -- phoenix
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