All I can feel is my cold toes from an extreme lack of heat. The loud sound of silence is killing me. My fingers are starting to get cold so I rest them on my lips. I lay in a bed only comfortable when alone. But yet I feel lonely. When the bread does it's job shouldn't I be happy? Why is living not enough but so much at the same time. Anxious of being alone yet also worried about the judgment of eyes. At one point in my life I would have seen this as a perfect perfection. But now I am lonely yet free of eyes. Dancing by yourself is the most free of feelings, but as the time ticks, you come to realize that dancing is only dancing and that people give you feelings that last forever whether they be good or bad. Feeling pain is better than feeling nothing at all. I will put myself out there into the world and it will decide if it pushes me or pick me back up. I will take control of my regrets and make them reality. I will take my chances while I still have them, take risks as they kill me and graciously bring me back to life, and take people as they come and go. I will let go and keep holding on at the same time.
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Author:
T.C. (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: First of all I'm very sorry that I haven't posted in a while. Second of all this poem/stanza is actually just me reading my thoughts aloud and sharing them with you guys so I really hope you enjoy this little piece of my heart. I'm always welcome to any and all feedback and always feel free to inbox or comment. Anyways thanks for reading!
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An appealing lyrical poem inspiring motivating positivity and hope. Unwritten very nicely. Keep it up. Thumbs up for the poetic vibes.
Pls do comment on my latest poem too, u r most welcome to. Even one line will do.
Your quote pic choice is amazingly wonderful
I can relate to some parts of this, & I think the way you expressed your emotions is truly beautiful.. & those lines from "The sound of silence" go pretty well with this piece 😉 its amazing!
Thank you and thanks for commenting even though I already sent it to you . Also the sound of silence is actually one of my favorite songs and I really like it when disturbed does it 😁
awesome, I love their version! 😉
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