I'm tired
It's all I seem to feel
Tired
Completely broken
And tired
In a world filled with hate
So tired
Very tired
Too tired
I need a fucking nap
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Author:
Naeners (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I don't know how I feel about this one. It's different from how I usually write, so I'm a little out of my comfort zone, but I think that's good sometimes. Sorry it's so short it's a new style of writing so I haven't completely figured it out yet. Please tell me what you think! Constructive criticism is always welcomed.
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
I think everyone is tired in their own way even if they don't even know it. Great write!
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