You’re as lovely as a laced-rainbow,
Like all the swirls of caramel-brown hair;
Exalting your languorous, rapture-blue eyes,
With your radiant heart-shaped gorgeous lips
As sweet as the brown Dominican-honey;
Shown in your bouncy personality,
Like the ochrous hued of Spring morning rain
Falling on you head with suspiring drops.
A palette of splashing beautiful shades,
You display in the voguish clothes you wear,
Mesmerizing me and leaving me so
Lightheaded in a state of nirvana
Taking me to a dreamland like heaven.
You’re very exciting; prettier than Hera.
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Author:
rrodriguez (
Offline) - Published: January 31st, 2017 14:09
- Comment from author about the poem: I worked hard on this poem. It's a sonnet of four long sentences-the first sentence ending at line 8, the second line 13, and 3 & 4 on line 14. It is a poem of beauty and of love.
- Category: Special occasion
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Comments8
Thank you both... the amazing things you can do writing when you work, work, work, and stay with it until it feels right. Thank you so much for your words.
And you did a fine job Mister rr
Kudus for a well don piece
willy says thank you for sharing sir
Great write
Thank you Tony.
Just so good rr.
Very enjoyable read.
Well done sir...
Thank you Kat.
Such description in this poem. I loved it! Haven't read a sonnet like this beauty in a long time!
Very beautiful!
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