mom

avigail

 

Being with mom (86) long hours in a hospital and a rehab reveals layers of perception:

  • Her real personality beyond the image she presents,
  • Her soft, silky non hairy skin in most of her body as I massaged her,
  • The conditioning of the mind and the spaghetti conflicts of values that she  manifested,
  • Her sad eyes, hopeful eyes, anxiety eyes,
  • The blessing she got from Sarah which gave her strength and hope
  • The tough look and negative reactions when she felt in non-harmonious conditions.

 

 Being with mom (86) long hours in a hospital and a rehab revealed layers of perception.

 

  • Author: AVIGAIL (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 4th, 2017 10:07
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 38
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  • Antoinette

    I deffinately get this sense of a cycle and peeling back at the layers of your your mother truly is. I loved it. 😉

    • avigail

      thank you AJ12345
      🙂

      • Antoinette

        It's not until someone else writes my username that I realise how rubbish it is.

        • avigail

          change it :)))

        • Tony36

          Wonderfully written and expressed

          • avigail

            dear Tony,nice seeing u again and getting your precise feedback 🙂

            • Tony36

              Welcome

            • WriteBeLight

              Insightful and full of images. Well done.

              • avigail

                thank you dear

                • WriteBeLight

                  🙂



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