The rage embraced in heart and soul,
Has fueled my inner pain
While thoughts consume my restlessness,
No hope in me remains
I've fought control and wrestled with,
These dreams within my mind
But nothing seems to remedy,
This hurt I feel inside
Would Death relieve my weariness,
And give me peace anew
Or will it start to fade away,
As thoughts turn back to you
Does loneliness and misery,
Consist of all my friends
Or will tomorrow bring to me,
The beginning of the end
I'm bound to die a broken man,
With nothing left to gain
As rage embraced in heart and soul,
Has fueled my inner pain
- Author: Jeff ( Offline)
- Published: February 15th, 2017 12:23
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments11
I have to agree....thanks for your comment
Very poignant and so well written Jeff!
Thank you for commenting... I appreciate it
Well written and expressed
Thank you Tony...I appreciate it
Welcome
This is an excellent write. Thoughts I have struggled with too. I think most people have. Love the rhyme and rhythm!
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Hello again my dear friend. Have not seen or heard from you in a while. I too have been in and out. Your poem is sad, well penned but sad. I hope all is well with you.
A.
I will make it lol...thanks for the comment and concern
Very very powerful write Jeff!
Thanks for the comment
That's a heartbreaking way to look at things but I get why you do. Sometimes pain is all that we feel so it seems like that's all there is. Thank you for putting it out there, it was sad yet truthful poem.
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Anytime..
I love this ❤️
Thank you
.... Wow
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Lol....me too...thanks for commenting
Jeff, many artists do their best work when deeply troubled. Somehow it brings out the best in us. Your poem is proof of that. Keep writing please!!!
Thank you for all your comments...
Great write
Thank you for your comment...I certainly appreciate it
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