No title, just words ...
A simple sound of sweet serenity
Fills this void of darkened days
All hope was lost in early foot steps
Now strides so long no path remains
Voices that echoed for all eternity
Fall silent now just time allowed
Fear was the key in my submission
Fear of everything all lights all sounds
An arrogance of energy replaced that feeling
Selfishness and stupidity was a badge worn lightly
Love is now my only friendship
Kin and kind have all my time
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Author:
P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 16th, 2017 18:35
- Comment from author about the poem: I woke this morning with these Words in my head... I just wrote them down...
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments4
Great job. Love the last lines.
Thank you WBL
I really appreciate
All your comments
I love how deep your emotions run and showcase your writing.
Thank you Ash.
Welcome to
My weird and
Now sometimes
Wonderful world.
I haven't read your
Work but will do
Later today..
Thanks again..
They may be "JUST WORDS" but the ones chosen and the way you masterfully arranged them into this beautiful piece is magical, great work PHR.
Wow thank you NAP
For those lovely words.
Coming from you
That is wonderful
I love words you picked for this poem. The contrast that you create is beautiful. Its smooth and to the point.
Well done
Thank you so much Ash.
For those lovely comments.
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