No title, just words....

P.H.Rose

        No title, just words ...

A simple sound of sweet serenity
Fills this void of darkened days
All hope was lost in early foot steps
Now strides so long no path remains
Voices that echoed for all eternity
Fall silent now just time allowed
Fear was the key in my submission
Fear of everything all lights all sounds
An arrogance of energy replaced that feeling
Selfishness and stupidity was a badge worn       lightly
Love is now my only friendship
Kin and kind have all my time

 

  • Author: P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 16th, 2017 18:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: I woke this morning with these Words in my head... I just wrote them down...
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 46
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Comments4

  • WriteBeLight

    Great job. Love the last lines.

    • P.H.Rose

      Thank you WBL
      I really appreciate
      All your comments

    • Ash

      I love how deep your emotions run and showcase your writing.

      • P.H.Rose

        Thank you Ash.
        Welcome to
        My weird and
        Now sometimes
        Wonderful world.
        I haven't read your
        Work but will do
        Later today..
        Thanks again..

      • notapoet

        They may be "JUST WORDS" but the ones chosen and the way you masterfully arranged them into this beautiful piece is magical, great work PHR.

        • P.H.Rose

          Wow thank you NAP
          For those lovely words.
          Coming from you
          That is wonderful

        • Ash

          I love words you picked for this poem. The contrast that you create is beautiful. Its smooth and to the point.
          Well done

          • P.H.Rose

            Thank you so much Ash.
            For those lovely comments.



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