Darkness consumes the bright blue sky
The sliver moon replaces the sun
Blooming flowers become tall stems of terror
The innocent strangers now seem like murderers
Beautiful scenery transforms into a endless forest
Sparkling rivers become red pools of blood
Sweet music now sounds like distorted hell
Everything is terrifying at night time
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Author:
Mysterious Poet (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Gothic
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Sometimes the darkness knows no end. Great imagery. You have a great way with words. Keep it up.
Your poems are good. I can see the images you create. Now change them to something I've not seen before. A word here or there will make all the difference. Just like you said "red pools of blood," that's an image not normally seen.
You have a huge talent. I can tell you love playing with words. Be unusual. Describe things differently. You will have fun and so will your readers. - Phil A.
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