River stone

Reivax Camlost

A single moment rests in silence

Broken only by a little creek of hope

And from that creek, a stone defiant

Rests close to me forevermore

  • Author: Reivax Camlost (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 17th, 2017 07:49
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 14
  • User favorite of this poem: Augustus.


  • Tony36

    Great write

  • MendedFences27

    Loved it. A great image expressed cleverly and clearly. Every word matters. Great write.- Phil A.

  • Augustus

    What it says to me is that hope is the rock upon which we can go on when the going is tough. I love the rhyme between silence and defiance. Enjoyed.

    • Reivax Camlost

      You got it just right! Lol meter, rhyme, and other literary devices are the seasonings with which we craft the metaphorical Crab and Mushroom Risotto of poetry. Thanks for reading.

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