Look upon the sky
You might want to fly
Instead hold on
And eat a bonbon
See the sunrise
Do not speak of lies
See the sunset
Do not place bets
Wonder of your life
Get rid of the knife
Go climb hills
Instead of using pills
Instead of drowning yourself
Be thyself
Don't forget the past
But don't dwell on the past
We love you
You might love us too
Don't be afraid to tell
Do it for the ones who fell
Stay strong
You are not wrong
Don't let fears control
Don't hide in a hole
See the sun
Please don't die hun
Look at the stars
Want to live on mars
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The past
Is where the bad happened
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The present
Is where we are now
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The future
Will unfold itself soon
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Love it, well done, you are a great poet! Don't worry I find it kind of hard to write happy poems too 🙂
Thank you. Also I think a lot of people do. Or maybe they don't.
Who knows? I don't know anyone (apart from mps) who writes poems... my best friend does sometimes but I dragged her into it lol!
Looking forward to your next poem
This is so very beautiful, and very hopeful! I'm glad you've written it, because it's just amazing!
Thank you that means a lot to me, but I only wrote it because someone wants me to write happier ones.
Of course! And my mom once said that I should write happier ones also, but I cannot do that it seems. I rather enjoy the darker ones! But this is amazing!
Yes and I'm going back to depressing ones tomorrow or when I can get on because I'm doing something this weekend.
Well, whenever you posy it, I can't wait to read it, because they are really amazing!
Thanks
Great write
Thank you.
Welcome
Well done! This is more than mere poetry, it is wisdom. I know how tough it is to express such wisdom when it seems counter to my own dark, present reality; however, you expressed that wisdom exquisitely. I hope that it acts as a reminder to you that no matter how dark things get, there is always hope. I know this poem will act as that reminder to me. Another masterful write!!!
Thank you trlange that means a lot to me.
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