a life absorbed
my life again
me again
i again
wow
will it never end
maybe I’m about me because i dont like me
im not enough
i’ve made my decision
me oh me
poor poor me
the make up on my face isn’t enough
just to cover up
the ugly all held up
i’ll let go of myself
when I’m satisfied
maybe i lied
too many times
the only answer i seek
is no where to be seen.
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Author:
Aals (
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- Comment from author about the poem: WARNING: THIS IS NOT ABOUT ME
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me thinks 2 als is a beautiful women iin a just waiting in girls body just she be 18 a young women for next birth me also thinks she makes believe she big ego but she reall talking the ego of another that we all know so you look and will whistle? I thought I was wrong once so I checked the facts and after I learned I was right that only time I wrong only if me thinks not right or could be wrong is only so I right most of times me smart to ssoo that's me story and I will stick too it!ww
haha wow. you actually guessed it. This poem isn't about me. Thankyou soo much ahah
I may fake being stupid but I am rather intelligent and I have the poor grades to prove it? of all the people
and I also think I guessed right about if not you than whoo? say the wise old owl Whoo ? Whhoo else?
and if you are not a beautiful young women the you still are a beautiful Mind or Iwill eat my hat ! and send you a viedo tape of my lunch! true that!
ps I did not guess I just knew or felt it?
just friends who constantly have issues with their body. and i have had alot of issues with myself as well, so i mixed my feelings and thiers. haha i get feelings like that. its calling impathy
I really was talking to the two guys who say o don't woryy! but not you I come here for fun but some people come to sympathize ? same thing right? close enough for me>WW poor guys you are bad al+al
girl.. keep up the good work WW
THANKYOUU
Treatise on poor esteem. Poetry is good. If that is the way you truly feel then you need to work on that. Hugs.
haha this isn't about me. Probably should've put a comment on this one about that.
Glad to hear that. I enjoy writing as if I were another person at times, even the opposite sex. I think those of us interested in poetry find fascination in just about everything. Warm regards.
yeah, that 100% true, thankyou
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