The ice is melting it's fading away oh what a price we are going to pay.
Big oil tankers spill there oil slicks and ruin mother nature she must feel so sick.
It kills the fish it kills the sea birds it's so selfish and wrong there will be no sea life left on earth .
We keep chopping down trees and putting houses in the place soon this earth will be chocablock we'll have no space.
We keep making cars and putting pollution in the air our children are all breathing it its really not fair, and soon it will get worse we'll have not one breath spare
We need to calm it or stop it now please someone listen and and show us all how, but it will never happen because of the powers that be to much greed and lust for money,
I feel so sorry for our future kin as they are the ones that will carry our sins
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Author:
N j stafford aka lonely poet aka bombhead82 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 20th, 2017 17:43
- Comment from author about the poem: This is a poem I wrote when I was 15 years old and just started to get the itch to write poetry and I'm 34 now so sorry if not so great it was one of my first
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Love it man... keep up the good work 👍
Thanks for the comment my friend glad you liked
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if you wrote this today I would say it was brilliant! but say 15yrs old you knew more and was more observe then even most kids for sure the say note to self tell dad hell know what if anything, but you says 34 now so Idid the the math
you were born in 1982 and take everything serious and are here blow peoples minds and now I can't find my mind? And you let us of easy because we are old and you are so young but tomorrow caution beware I just wrote this this morning and you will need a mop and bucket to find the the small pieces of your head never mind your mind you won.t every fine that
so I will enjoy my head tonight if I read you tomorrow just kidding but I can see you will not be just passing through I have read the three or four and all where good but maybe I read to fast but for sure you have this poet s attention now ! Bravo ww write on please !
Thank u ever so much your response really cheered me up thank u for the appreciation mor coming soon
I want till you ready ! ITry to hold both fast and steady!
And yes 82 is correct my friend
I am intelligent it is very difficult to fake being stupid but I do try, sometimes my mind races so that is a good way of relief ? ww Aka Richard
Dude that this awesome
Thank you I was very young was thinking twice about putting it on actually
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