Child Wonders...

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  P.H.Rose February 21st, 2017 16:55

  This is so very good
  Maichael I really like
  It, but would of loved
  A last word such as..
  Mother !!!! Or
  Farther !!!!
  I hope you don't take offence
  The poem is brilliant
  It was just a thought..
  Well done...

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    MaichaelFebruary 21st, 2017 23:54

    This was written in ten minutes while doing my laundry. It was just the thoughts that were running trough my mind as I thought about my baby girl. Because I just had a daughter (my first). And those questions more as toward me... What if those happens what would I do? But I completely agree... What you think of part two answer those questions? Because that's what I was planning on doing but I didn't think anyone would relate to this or understand this. Thank you for the feedback anyways much love

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  Augustus February 21st, 2017 18:57

  Exactly the mind of a child. They need answers to all of those and need them repeadly, more by your actions than words. Well done.

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    MaichaelFebruary 21st, 2017 23:56

    Yes I did answered those questions in m head but I didn't put them down. I was thinking about part to this... But I completely agree actions is louder than words. Thank you for the feedback!

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  Augustus February 21st, 2017 18:58

  P.S. The sillouette is perfect for your piece.

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    MaichaelFebruary 21st, 2017 23:57

    Thank you for the encouragement me and the feedback!

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  Maichael February 21st, 2017 23:59

  And I wanted the picture to relate to everyone not just my child.

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  Elbeanzio February 22nd, 2017 16:33

  Congratulations on your daughter man. I have two boys and must admit all we did with the first was panic. Every cry is a mystery or uncertainty. Second one was instinct as you learn a lot the first time round. Oh and enjoy sterilising bottles lol. Love the poem btw.