I don’t know what
You been told
But L.A women
Don’t have a soul
Be they young
Or be they old
They will leave you
Out there in the cold
Just before
It starts to snow
With hot coffee
And a buttered roll
I don’t what else to say
But that is the only way
We love our women
That a way
When it’s cold
Out here in L.A
If you’re talking
a summer day
I would have
Nothing else to say
I winter in Miami USA
I love the Cubans anyway?
But I thought
we were taking
California’s old L.A?
I live in
San Diego anyway
And I knowing nothing
of what I say
And didn’t you start
this conversation anyway?
Well I don’t know
So I can’t say
But if you insist
Then I just say
No, I think we are in
Portland Oregon?
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Author:
willyweed (
Offline) - Published: February 23rd, 2017 12:11
- Comment from author about the poem: some days I kill me some times I just feel like it but I know you love me so what can I do I would not do that kind of thing to you? Thats why I love it at the Zoo because the animals may smile but they never talk back.
- Category: Fantasy
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Comments5
I think the animals are smiling.
well since YOU BROKE IT OFF with me Thank you Miss wright be light hmm!
PS I am sorry I always give you a hard time but no one else will talk to me ILU ww
🙂
You're lucky they don't talk back. An animal talked back to me once and I freaked though I see things and hear things that aren't there so that's probably the reason. This is a great poem. I love it.
I' have heard of you once upon a time in a story I was told and so now that I have your attention Wolf girl # 7 I should say I love you too! peace ww oh I see now? you said it.. I mean??? it too ???
I love it do.... sorry? ! just kidding ... no he's not ... ww/s doctor
Um...okay thanks?
really I am just kidding ... I didnt know you where a child but I do now so Please forgive me ? OK
Yeah no it's cool. Just don't call me a child please.
fair enough and thank you I meant young ?
Love the way this goes all over the place. Cheers.
Hey Augustus I am feeling better and seeing things with clarity but I thought if I could write like this and keep this kind of write in my control every one would see I am ok, but I guess its having the opposite affect I thing I am scaring the then again? now I do have the jones for a hot cup of coffee and a buttered roll but other than that? thanks for the read and your friendship Richard.
By all over I believed it was your intent. It was very well put together. The trying to make sense was consistent. Then you added :"And I knowing nothing
of what I say
And didn’t you start
this conversation anyway?" which I thought was clever.
just checking I 'm at least as sane as the president? Thanks buddy yes my intent was to may no sense while the reader did? friends like you are precious ! for sure ww
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