I am the air that will never stop you.
For when you dive. Not because I do not care; but because you are limitless.
Slowing you will only damage your wings of the sea.
Your cool waters entice me.
They capture and hold me hostage.
I struggle in your wake, yet I fight so hard to become as delicate as your stroke.
The way you glide through the water, you are entirely in your element.
And I; a bird sunken in the sea.
You are unlike fire, for I do not feel a burning passion for you.
I feel serenity, intimacy.
At ease in your wet embrace.
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Author:
Gemaeice (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 25th, 2017 15:32
- Comment from author about the poem: Me and my boyfriend are swimmers, in this poem i really play on our zodiac elements. I am a Gemini and he is a Pisces.
- Category: Love
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You paint a beautiful picture of yourself and your boyfriend relaxing at sea. If baseball is the American pastime, then beach vacations must be the American Dream.
A solid poem, not focusing overly much on silly rhymes or restricting formulae, rather remaining simply expressive and heartfelt.
Lol, I'm a Sagittarius... I often feel as if I have no natural partner, and end up lolling into spells of my melancholy nature... but this poem fills me with gladness, all the same!
Thank you so much for your kindness. ❤❤❤❤❤
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