Pisces counterpart

AudreyB

I am the air that will never stop you. 

For when you dive. Not because I do not care; but because you are limitless. 

Slowing you will only damage your wings of the sea. 

Your cool waters entice me.

They capture and hold me hostage. 

I struggle in your wake, yet I fight so hard to become as delicate as your stroke. 

The way you glide through the water, you are entirely in your element. 

And I; a bird sunken in the sea. 

You are unlike fire, for I do not feel a burning passion for you. 

I feel serenity, intimacy. 

At ease in your wet embrace. 

 

  • Author: Gemaeice (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 25th, 2017 15:32
  • Comment from author about the poem: Me and my boyfriend are swimmers, in this poem i really play on our zodiac elements. I am a Gemini and he is a Pisces.
  • Category: Love
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  • Reivax Camlost

    You paint a beautiful picture of yourself and your boyfriend relaxing at sea. If baseball is the American pastime, then beach vacations must be the American Dream.

    A solid poem, not focusing overly much on silly rhymes or restricting formulae, rather remaining simply expressive and heartfelt.

    Lol, I'm a Sagittarius... I often feel as if I have no natural partner, and end up lolling into spells of my melancholy nature... but this poem fills me with gladness, all the same!

    • AudreyB

      Thank you so much for your kindness. ❤❤❤❤❤



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