Young & Dumb

Crashing waves hit the rocks like the flooding of emotions had in my head

In that moment your presence felt like home when you were next to me. 

Your eyes twinkled like the stars I wish I could have stolen for you,

and your voice has become my favorite song. 

I hope can fall in love with my imperfections like I have yours

and I hope every time you look at me you don't see her because I think we could fall in love.

Maybe I'm just young & dumb or maybe you and I are going to be enough.


  • Tony36

    Well written and expressed, Never call yourself dumb

  • Augustus

    Your excited anticipation is reflected in this well penned free verse.

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