If you were to look at it differently... why does man not fall. If I twist my head to 90 degrees he appears to walk on the wall. The emptiness of the space around you when all you can see is sky. The lonely cloud the move about and gets closer as you die.
The slippery sheets of life controllers lost by the poor man. The buses igore him when he is snoring, he's asleep who gIves a damn? The hand of God that rushes you to look at things a different way, if you tilt you head just once, thinges may loOK positive one day.
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TomLovesey (
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I tried this once but I got dizzy and then I walked into traffic and almost got hit by a bus but plus the bus driver was sleeping and so the hand of God intervened and the bus driver woke a swayed the bus just in the nick of time plus you should have seen the LoOk on that drivers and besides I think your poem is cOol and interesting so plus I liked it thanks for sharing it today march 2 20010 ok. WW
Thank you, I appreciate you enjoy the poem, thank you for the anecdote, noted.
Do whatever you need to do to get a better understanding of the world around you. Things may not be as they seem. Nicely done.
Thank you very much Augustus. I will do
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