I remember when you said you loved me, joy spread to my heart like a explosion of flame and air, whirling like a whirlwind inside me. Your love consumed my soul until you where all I knew,wanted and desired.
I remember when you said you loved me, the night you set my body in flames, consuming my every thought and desire as if I was your willing slave and you my master. Kneeling to your every desire. Lost in the rapid tides of this whirlwind they call love.
Do you remember that night all so long ago my love? The fire and passion, My desire and willingness to please you? Ohhh how I wish you did.
Now I'm a shell of a girl I used to know! Whole but broken. Urning for you and your touch and that fire. Alone.. Where are you now with all your broken promises?
I still remember and say your name softly in the wind hoping it'll reach you and you'll hear how broken you've left me inside.
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Author:
Tanya (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Love
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Comments2
This is a great write!
Thank you so much. 😀
AMAZING WRITE!!
Thank you 😁
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