One breath in, one breath out
Lips on my mouth
Trying to make me breathe
Why couldn't you just leave
Hands pushing down
You I remember gave me a crown
The sun looks pretty today
Why is cozy to just lay
Take me out of the pool
Always called me cool
The moon and stars...
I won't get to go on Mars
It's bright
I see a light
His tears are falling
Why is he bawling
Oh I wish I could hear him laugh
He has a beautiful laugh
His smile shines bright
I tried to always fight
The ambulance... I'm in it
What happened? Did I get hit?
She's alive don't worry
He said this is like a story
I took small and fast breaths
I did this so I can meet death
I can't breathe at all
I think I decided to fall
What does he have next to him
Oh, I know!! I tried to swim
Now back to my beautiful
That... What's with all the bull...
He looks at me and tells me sorry
Sorry he left me be
My eyes felt heavy
I guess I do get leave
BEEP BEEP BEEEEP
The doctors rushed...
They started whispering...
I'm sorry sir...
They talked to her family in private...
She... She's gone
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WolfIsControlledByTheDemons (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is about a young girl. Who her and her brother decided to go swimming. He knows she's suicidal, but he left her be to do something. When he came back and was looking up to him from the pool. They were in the hospital when her heart stop. Her brother went to get the picture she drew him. When she was 8. He was supposed to talk to her about what's going on because his mother asked him to. Though in the end the young girl died. This is fictional I made it up.
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I have seriously disagree against, Outback. This story had a compelling insertion that not many can grip on if held with your eyelids shut. The drowning reminded me of Jason from Crystal lake. Though that may be fictional in some cases. The meaning behind the message is deeper than the shallows of morality.
Keep writing scholarly poet. There is more truth behind the cause & effect of what truly dwells within our livelihood.
Thank you Hypothesis I'm glad you understand. Many people wouldn't understand the meaning of the story, but I have a feeling that you do. Thanks for commenting.
there was a time when i almost died
i saw light but i also saw darkness i didn't know where to go so i stayed in between and so i stand here alive now wondering if i would have been better off dead
You are not better off dead. I'm glad you're alive. Those times when we've almost died are when we realize we belong here.
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