In Collaboration With Severus Alexander

Reivax Camlost

Nameless called, who wingless, fly

Who whisper prayers as passers-by

Voiceless, fall, to doubtless die

And wistful spare, that none might cry

Restless crawl, through long goodbye

  • Author: Reivax Camlost (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 9th, 2017 10:33
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 26


  • Tris Eaton

    I see you two figured out what to add to his two lines. Very nice. I like it a lot.

    • Tris Eaton

      He asked me what to add and I told him I had no idea

      • Reivax Camlost

        Yup. Thanks, I like it too... You don't think it's easily discernable where his writing and mine separate?

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      • Severus Alexander

        I think it is. My lines are the only two that have anything in common.

        • Tris Eaton

          lol, it is a good poem all together, though, in my opinion at least

          • Reivax Camlost

            Disagree! The final line fit the model of the first and third, while the other two were supposed to offer some sort of contrast schematically- and, ultimately, the message prevails throughout the entire poem.

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          • Reivax Camlost

            I mean, I disagree with severus

          • Augustus

            Ah, the wistful, nameless, whisperer strikes again. You 2 are a trip.

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