Nameless called, who wingless, fly
Who whisper prayers as passers-by
Voiceless, fall, to doubtless die
And wistful spare, that none might cry
Restless crawl, through long goodbye
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I see you two figured out what to add to his two lines. Very nice. I like it a lot.
He asked me what to add and I told him I had no idea
Yup. Thanks, I like it too... You don't think it's easily discernable where his writing and mine separate?
I don't really know. It doesn't help that I know who's is who's because he showed me his part before you wrote this
I think it is. My lines are the only two that have anything in common.
lol, it is a good poem all together, though, in my opinion at least
Disagree! The final line fit the model of the first and third, while the other two were supposed to offer some sort of contrast schematically- and, ultimately, the message prevails throughout the entire poem.
lol I don't know how teachers deal with you two in the same class
Hrm. Somewhat Strenuously. How did you know we were in the same class?
lol I don't know *ridiculously sarcastic*
Lol that obvious? XD
look at my message lol
lol I did
I mean, I disagree with severus
Ah, the wistful, nameless, whisperer strikes again. You 2 are a trip.
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