Evening mumbled near this highway,
Connecting to two major cities of country,
Muffled trees gave breeze of emotion,
This lorry hastened carrying crude oil.
Arriving far destination was motive,
Mind sprinted with observation of muse,
Taking turn in to right Colony Street,
I was pensively stood near the call tower.
Beauty of clean weather told clean road,
Black carpet was put, wheels walked far,
Trees mimicked blowing breeze of spring,
Fronds beside bushes saddled grasses.
Sand like water dribbled down the street,
Meeting lorry in highway love floated,
Separation brought agony doing duty,
Sterling vision vowed to proceed ahead.
© Pintu Mahakul, 20 March 2017. All rights reserved.
Note: Cover Photo © Pintu Mahakul 2017.
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You have created a thoughtful piece full of images. Nice work! Picture works as well.
Thank you very much for your nice feedback.
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Jarid Miller: You've written this with such grace. Your poetry is soothing to read. Great imagery along with the story told.
March 28,2017 at 4: 38pm
Jane Taylor Hardy: You always write with eloquence Pintu Mahakul
March 28,2017 at 4: 39pm
Ency Bearis: A unique poem and astutely written.
March 28,2017 at 5: 11pm
Anthony Davidson: Pintu, my friend, I do believe you could write about ANY THING and some how make it sound poetic! Very few people have a gift to do that and you seem to be one of the few. 😊 That is simply amazing, my friend! 😊
March 28,2017 at 5: 17pm
Rosie Villorejo: Your keen observations to the things around you and your eloquence with words just go harmoniously. Its a blessing!
March 29,2017 at 1: 39am
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