Light or Dark

Discreation

Light

Darkness

Darkness

Light

Either one can fill you with spite

Hate what you don't have

Or love what you need

There's a fine line between

 

Darkness

Light

Light

Darkness

Who can suppress a sunny day

When it is meant to take the pain away

Theft is a sin 

But it's to feed your kin

There a is fine line within

 

Light

Darkness

Darkness

Light

How do you know when you've crossed the line

  • Author: Descreat (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 30th, 2017 22:58
  • Comment from author about the poem: How can you be sure that the darkness you see is just the "persona", of light?
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments7

  • Discreation

    Than you damaged. You really can't.

  • WriteBeLight

    Love the back and forth. Great writing.

  • Discreation

    Thank you. I wanted to try something different.

  • willyweed

    I like the ying yang of this piece. write on! ww

    • Discreation

      Thank you. That was surprisingly what I was going for.

      • willyweed

        Oh I'm full of surprises! WW

      • 1 more comment

      • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

        interesting and enjoyable read ! 🙂 nicely done .

      • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

        i like the repetiiton of the words '' darkness and light '' it definately works well in thiis piece of wriitng

      • Discreation

        Thanks. That is just what I was trying to do, 🙂



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