I am currently working on more light hearted work after a wonderful year of change . God bless you all..
Rumours
of soldiers who bear the birthmark of blasphemy
Mingling together to co-create a pattern of chaos
Reborn eons ago, when life was yet to have been harnessed
Divinity, only hypothesis
Scorn
Fear
Envy
Natural reactions, instinctual
A fatal attraction to a beast that selfishly claimed ebony as its color
A master of illusion
A harbinger of riches who's high horse ran off into the wilderness
So suddenly, the seclusion
To create the fear that welcomed in the intrusion
A new world order sprouted from the grounds where it was laid
Humanity has paid ever since
Hence, the outcome
This multi-dimensional concrete jungle
Its branches twisting and turning in serpentine ambidextricity
Blanketing the interface of this living being that we have so ungratefully labeled our home
Demons roam the night from dawn to dusk to midnight to the witching hour
The one that never misses the chance to bring forth a summoner or two or ten or hundreds
Scrambling the darkness with hideous sounds that roll without reluctance off forked tongues
Hung by nooses in the days of old
A druibic time when violence overrode ay chance of having a unified dream
Now, the uncovering of so many that all we peasants have held in such high esteem
Selling their sould so that their images will sell
Bank accounts, ovwerflowing
Surrounding them, the gates of Hell
Some of them, ridden by the darkness since they emmerged from the soil
Others, once the children of God
Angels who all fell for the lie
We cannot see past the blue behind the pollution in the sky
The nerve of them to make themselves believe that tit was we the people who have chosen to let ourselves die
It has all been said
Who is DONE now?
6/27/2010
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LIGHT WARRIOR (
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Sorry Pharoah, this style doesn't appeal much to me.
I suspect it's a piece that works for slam/rap type presentations, but I'm a generation before that and don't take to it.
All the best with your endeavours, though. Cheers, F~
Well, then, I suggest you read one of the other 132 that I have published on this site....Not all poems can be from another era....This is the TRUTH about how it is to be involved in the Music and or film industry...they are selling their souls for fame and fortune...sorry that you didn't like it but its not going to bring me down or stop me from my endeavors...youre the only negative comment I have ever received so I guess I don't know what to say other than not to typecast me as "talentless"
Well, then, I suggest you read one of the other 132 that I have published on this site....Not all poems can be from another era....This is the TRUTH about how it is to be involved in the Music and or film industry...they are selling their souls for fame and fortune...sorry that you didn't like it but its not going to bring me down or stop me from my endeavors...youre the only negative comment I have ever received so I guess I don't know what to say other than not to typecast me as "talentless"
Absolutely, you should go for it. My views are personal and small. There is a huge audience for contemporary verse and I encourage you to pursue it. It's just not to my taste, but I'm a small pimple in the poetry universe.
best luck out there.
Cheers,
Frank
No, nobody is a small pimple...I just want you to know that it isn't the only writing style I use and that I have a wide variety of topics covered in my manuscript...thank you for your input either way
Happy to meet you Pharoah33. I'll look for future pieces, rather than look back, but either way I'll read you some more.
Cheers,
F~
Well written and expressed Great write
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