I feel your love gives me this smile,
My vision is for you season is style.
Reason is something, miles I do run,
Sun I see in East, I am your soul son.
Sitting in this chariot of between eyes,
I drive my body, this body further dies,
I glow ever with my self luminous light,
Your love gives me power I glow bright.
Dear God, Dear Father you give love,
In your lovely garden I am flying dove.
Chirping whole day, singing your song,
Smiling ever I am in love since far long.
This smile is very beautiful is your art,
By your grace in love beats my heart.
Cart this body is of mine, I am a soul,
By your mercy riding this I achieve goal.
I am peaceful, I feel your love you give,
I have learnt the art from you to forgive.
Oh dear ocean of love I am point of life,
Your wisdom gives bliss I have no strife.
© Pintu Mahakul, 19 April 2008. All rights reserved.
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GOD love life what could be more?
wonderful thoughts wonderful poem.
write on WW
Thank you very much for your kind feedback.
Your appeal for the wisdom of a living faith is etched deeply in the lines of this lovely verse Pintu. A fine example given here lies in the ways and the whys that our smile can be beautiful..
Thank you very much madam for your kind feedback.
Jarid Miller (New Orleans, Louisiana, United States) : Great flow with a beautiful message. Well done.
April 7,2017, at 4: 29am
Lynda Robson (New Quay, United Kingdom) : Lovely verse and words of faith 👏🏻👏🏻
April 7,2017, at 5: 10am
Debbie Hamera: Many more Blessings sweet Soul... (((❤)))
April 7,2017, at 5: 22am
Aidyl Sireab (Nabua, Camarines Sur, Phillippines) : Strong faith with a great honor
April 7,2017 at 5: 40am
Sharon Greenwell Gurley (Hayti / Concord, Missouri, United States) : Beautiful poem of love and grace, well done [3
April 7,2017 at 6: 04am
Jane Taylor Hardy (United States) : Very nice Dr. Pintu Mahakul
April 7,2017 at 6: 50am
Rene Scott ( Orlando, Florida, United States) : Pintu, my friend! ! ! 😊 We must have been thinking of each other at the same time today! 😄 All of my notifications are going off now from you at the same time that I'm looking at your gorgeous, happy smile and reading your beautiful, and lovely poem! 😊 I'm so happy to see you smiling in your pictures more often now! You really do have a beautiful smile! ☺
April 7,2017 at 6: 51am
Ency Bearis (: From Nabua, Camarines Sur, Philippines / Lives in Las Vegas, Nevada, United States) A wonderful poem my friend. Noteworthy message and an uplifting verses and like the ocean ripples that touches the feet while on the beach and cool off the heart and mind into peace.
April 7,2017 at 7: 08am
Manabesh Mohanty (Cuttack, Odisha, India) : Super lines....Pintu...God bless you... And you rain such poems every time on the earth...To keep the earth cool....I m proud of you...
April 7,2017 at 8: 00am
Suraj Prakash Choudhury (Sundargarh, Odisha, India) : Nice teeth bandhu
April 7,2017 at 9: 53am
Raj Kiran: (Brahmapur, Odisha, India) Nice pic
April 7,2017 at 7: 29pm
Chinmay Guru: (Sambalpur, Odisha, India) Really you are glowing with such beautiful smile... Keep smiling always.. Beautiful poem..
April 7,2017 at 8: 09pm
Necy Baesa Escuro (Nabua, Camarines Sur, Phillippines) : What can I say? .....superbly written.!
April 8,2017 at 2: 08am
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Flossy McGowan: Ohhhh Pintu, that is absolutely lovely. I can see God through your amazing, loving smile.
April 8,2017 at 8: 36am
Zelda Ann Broussard (From Marshall, Texas, United States / Lives in Las Vegas, Nevada, United States) : Beautiful ink!
April 8,2017 at 8: 59am
Ronell Warren (From Brooklyn, New York, United States / Lives in Lynnwood, Washington, United States) : Well crafted poem here brother Pintu.
April 8,2017 at 9: 07am
Wendy Ronshausen (From Fayetteville, North Carolina, United States / Lives in Mesquite, Texas, United States) : Excellent PEACE Pintu! ! ! Thank you for letting me read this graciousness today [3
April 8,2017 at 9: 07am
Jane Taylor Hardy (United States) : A beautiful pen Dr. Pintu Mahakul✨
April 8,2017 at 10: 48am
Melvina Germain (From Sydney, Nova Scotia Canada / Lives in Calgary, Alberta, Canada) : You are beneath the umbrella of our Father's glorious love. One can almost see that veil of illustrious light unfolding like a blanket within the sky. Such precious thought you have within obviously gifted by that ever-blooming, unconditional love only an amazing Father of light can give. I'm dazzled at the saccharin smile that lines the page, I can see the intensity of love in the surrounding ambience. Thank you so much for touching my soul this morning Pintu.....
April 8,2017 at 10: 54am
Ency Bearis (From Nabua, Camarines Sur, Philippines / Lives in Las Vegas, Nevada, United States) : Well penned poem, noteworthy to read.
April 8,2017 at 11: 39am
Sally Bayan (Manila, Philippines) : You have great faith in God, Pintu, which is so admirable...an exemplary one that takes you high.....and you are so right, God is an ocean of love...ever forgiving. Your peace comes from Him, and is reflected in your smile.
April 8,2017 at 12: 59pm
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Fay Slimm (From Kingswinford, West Midlands, United Kingdom / Lives in Camborne, Cornwall, United Kingdom) : The peace of your faith shows in these charming lines Pintu. Thank you for sharing a lovely outlook on life.
April 8,2017 at 2: 24pm
Sylvia Frances Chan (From Jakarta, Indonesia / Lives in Haarlem, Netherlands) : This is really a poem to my [3 dear Pintu. This is the TRUTH and nothing but THE TRUTH. Indeed if one believes in God, then we (YOU and I) know to FORGIVE. never mind what the other´s fault is, we just forgive, so we can continue the future. I admire the words you created, marvelous, fascinating. Your line I like most is: I have learnt the art from you to forgive. AMAZING! BTW your photo is cool and cutest! Thank you for sharing this most beautiful piece.God´s Blessings be in Abundance upon you.
April 8,2017 at 11: 01pm
Sharon Greenwell Gurley (Hayti / Concord, Missouri, United States) : Beautiful poem of love and great faith....
April 9,2017 at 9: 44pm
Bipin Churchung Rabha (From Tura, West Garo Hills District, Meghalaya, India / Lives in Guwahati, Assam, India) : Peace!
April 10,2017 at 12: 45am
LaSoaphia QuXazs (From Budapest, Hungary / Lives in Annapolis, Maryland, United States) : Beautiful poem, your faith shows clearly
April 10,2017 at 11: 33am
Rohan Guarda (From Belgaum, Karnataka, India / Lives in Bangalore, Karnataka, India) : Very nice....
April 11,2017 at 6: 09am
David Kavanamur (From Kokopo, Papua New Guinea / Lives in Port Moresby, Papua New Guinea) : Cool pix bruh
April 12,2017 at 11: 15pm
Susan Burgoyne (From Rugby, Warwickshire, United Kingdom) : Pintu.....you're such a Blessing to us all. 😊
April 12,2017 at 11: 25pm
Mike Hauser (From Winston-Salem, North Carolina, United States / Lives in Jacksonville, Florida, United States) : Such a beautiful piece my friend! Love truly shines through!
April 13,2017 at 12: 34am
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