I touch but cannot feel.
I listen but cannot hear.
I look but cannot see.
I reach out but cannot grasp.
I am.
But you are.
- Author: Bryso ( Offline)
- Published: April 10th, 2017 14:18
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I touch but cannot feel.
I listen but cannot hear.
I look but cannot see.
I reach out but cannot grasp.
I am.
But you are.
Comments1
Very well done. Interesting twist in the last line. Loved it but not sure i understood it.
Thanks, Garry. Just really a reflection on the fact that, while we are social beings and reach out to one another, we're also always alone within ourselves. I think there are times when we're more aware of this 'otherness', but hopefully it's not a constant state!
I like it, that sort idea is a common theme in my poems, who and why are we and how we "work" with other people. Sometimes it's a bit too well hidden!
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