A Dove Amongst The Crows (remix)

Edthepoet

I can hear her calling
The preachers daughter
Deep in battle with her upbringing

Can you hear her calling
The teachers taught her
Original thought is blasphemy

I can see her falling
Falling in there eyes
They can't see her flying
flying in my line of sight

Oh She has awakened
Like a rose blooming through the snow
Oh she has awakened
Like a dove amongst the crows

Those eastern eyes
Have come back to life
Those eastern eyes
Have found there home

  • Author: Edthepoet (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 19th, 2017 08:52
  • Comment from author about the poem: I remixed my own poem. Is that a thing? Who knows.. who cares..I inspired myself,which is pretty cool.
  • Category: Spiritual
  • Views: 28
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Comments1

  • Warded Seabee

    Nice write. I think remixing your poetry is fair game, it might be like coming back to a painting you did a long time ago and adding what you felt was missing the first time. Inspiration is a funny thing.. you never know where it will come from, and that includes yourself sometimes



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