I am Disciple of God

Pintu Mahakul

He is truth, his wisdom is good,

Learning breaks very hard wood.

Motherhood of his ever gives love,

Fatherhood is lovely, trust is glove.

Before him I do nod,

I am disciple of God.

 

I feel truth is in point he is ocean,

By his command time is in motion.

Lotion of his wisdom heals mind,

Our eternal father is very kind.

By grace smiles sod,

I am disciple of God.

 

No one is full in material world,

By his wisdom now I am furled.

He is full of wisdom nice teacher,

God is only our Super Preacher.

I am new ripen pod

I am disciple of God.

 

Body is my house body is a car,

I am soul I am light I drive it far.

Easily vices cannot motivate me,

I do not fall in greed danger I see.

I carry wisdom rod,

I am disciple of God.

 

I do love peace; I do not like war,

In father’s lap I like to play more,

Pouring wisdom he does dandle,

Candle I light, fragrant is sandal.

Positive is each odd,

I am disciple of God.

 

I am a peaceful soul, peace power,

In his garden I am eternal flower.

I am point in form in golden light,

Hour to hour I glow very bright.

Wisdom does a prod,

I am disciple of God.

 

Splendour of his wisdom is in trust,

Following father we gain this must.

Dust shines in light it becomes gold,

God gives us boon in unlimited fold

My life here is trod,

I am disciple of God.

 

© Pintu Mahakul, 19 April 1999. All rights reserved.

  • Author: Pintu Mahakul (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 22nd, 2017 22:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem is from my pen of 1999. This poem is written long back in early teenage at Koelnagar in Rourkela, Odisha, India on 19th April 1999 on occasion of my birthday and dedicated to the people of the world.
  • Category: Spiritual
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Comments3

  • Fay Slimm.

    Such a fine example of faith in action and written so early in life Pintu - many creative lines but one I think is one that inspires is "Splendour of his wisdom is in trust," - - thank you for sharing this piece of Godly devotion written in 1999.

  • orchidee

    A fine write.

  • Pintu Mahakul

    Feedback received: -

    Melvina Germain: This poem is a wonderful tribute to our Father in Heaven, a beautiful Blessing indeed giving Him all the glory. Beautiful.....
    April 22,2017 at 9: 29pm

    Rene Scott: A beautiful poem Pintu, my friend! ☺ Your heart is filled with peace and blessings always! ❤
    April 22,2017 at 11: 40pm

    Marie Shine: This poem has the elusive 'Wow! ' factor for me! It a superbly inked accolade to God eulogising Him. The words link God to the spirit of the poet, it is a beautiful union. I love how the poem finishes on one simple line which shows the loving relationship between the poet and God:
    'I am a disciple of God'
    Such a simple statement which speaks volumes.
    Wonderful write, dear Pintu! Thank you for sharing. Wish you a very happy and blessed Sunday - enjoy!
    April 23,2017 at 2: 18am

    Membis Godwin Chukwukamma: And I have learnt to be a disciple of God, to be truthful, kind and loving now I can say: I am disciple of God. What wonderful message here. Moralty and adoration to divinity. You have done really great brother and once more thanks for sharing such thoughtful poem.
    April 23,2017 at 3: 14am

    Meg Gultiano Villamera: This is written in splendor, with you always in awe to the existence and Glory of God.I love every line here.It shows your faith..It shines in every word.Thank you for sharing this wonderful tribute to our Lord.
    April 23,2017 at 4: 04pm

    Ronell Warren: Well crafted poem written here brother Pintu. Indeed, we are all children of God.
    April 23,2017 at 10: 02am

    Jarid Miller: A beautiful poem! Humble expression as a child admiring his father, so do you give praise in this piece. Great job!
    April 23,2017 at 11: 23am

    Lynda Robson: A wonderful poem Pintu, inspiring and an accolade to God 💙
    April 23, m 2017 at 1: 26pm

    Mike Hauser: I love this one! So inspirational my friend. Love the way it repeats at the end of every stanza. Praise Jesus!
    April 23,2017 at 3: 12pm

    Bipin Churchung: Rabha Great! Adorable
    April 23,2017 at 6: 05pm

    Sharon Greenwell Gurley: Beautiful and outstanding poem of praising God our Father....

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