What's that creaking
Alone in the night
Waiting for a moment
The perfect time to strike
It doesn't want your friendship
It just needs a bite
The creatures that crawl
Just out of sight
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Author:
Naeners (
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Very creepy write. Well done!
nice write i would like to read a little more tho.
Sorry but sadly this is set to stay a short poem as I don't think I could give my best work if I continued it. I would just be dragging it out as I originally intended to keep it short. But I'm glad to know you enjoy it 🙂
its a good write keep up the good work
Another good one. Well done. Yes very creepy indeed.
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