Through Your Light

Pintu Mahakul

This night has grown, this is deep,
Shadow scribbles, mind does peep.
Calmness adores village we delight,
Lantern is golden reflects your light.

Your light we find, joy also we find,
Now this night is tale, no more blind.
Kind father of heaven of ours you are,
In my hands this lantern is falling star.

Glowing more light is dazzling in face,
Base is your wisdom, I swim in space.
Lace is my shadow fabric cotton is shirt,
Ever I love creatures all never I do hurt.

Swimming in dream now swimming love,
Your light is mercy, your light is my glove.
Through your light I see birth after birth,
Your light through lantern shows me Earth.

Dear true father far you are not from me,
Through your light ever heaven we see.
Gandam to London all sing your glory,
Lorry of life moves fast in light of story.


© Pintu Mahakul​ 8 February 2015. All rights reserved along with cover photo.

  • Author: Pintu Mahakul (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 30th, 2017 01:30
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  • Pintu Mahakul

    Suraj Prakash Choudhury: Nice pic. A perfect poet in mood.
    February 10,2015 at 9: 03am

    Sandeep Panda: Lerthen dekhau cha kain ho. Pahela sadi kara tar pare jal ba
    See Translation: (Are you showing lantern, oh friend? First you marry, then you will light it)
    February 11,2015 at 2: 30am

    Ency Bearis: Noteworthy thoughts and well presented 👌
    April 20,2017 at 4: 50pm

    Flossy McGowan: And your smile is like a lantern too, as it lights up all who see it.
    April 20,2017 at 4: 55pm.

    Rene Scott: I love the image, I love your smile, ☺ and I love the rhymes! This is excellent, my friend! ❤
    April 20,2017 at 5: 23pm

    Mike Hauser: Very well written my friend!
    April 20,2017 at 5: 24pm

    Jerome E. Ellis Jr.: Well penned, my friend! Love the light.
    April 20,2017 at 5: 40pm

    Aidyl Sireab: A light to show the way to our path...
    April 20,2017 at 5: 48pm

    Soumya Ranjan Meher: Wah! ! ! ! Nice chain of words...
    .April 20,2017 at 5: 50pm

    Jarid Miller: Poetry is your bag. This is such a beautiful poem and your joy for writing flows through your pen to paper blessing the reader. Great job as always.
    April 20,2017 at 5: 51pm

    Ronell Warren: Well crafted poem here brother Pintu. Always move towards the light.
    April 20,2017 at 6: 30pm

    Bipin Churchung Rabha: Beautiful Sir
    April 20,2017 at 7: 14pm

    Chinmay Guru: God is ever illuminous he will shower his golden rays on us every moment. Things ever change on this earth but our beloved heavenly father never.He treats the same way today as he was in past and will remain same in future. We are so lucky to receive his blessings everyday.your complete poem is all about the rays that is nature of all human beings. May god bless you with his golden shower of rays. Very fantastic well crafted poem is reflecting your usual skills as seen on other poems
    April 20,2017at 8: 27pm ·

    Marie Shine: Beautiful poem/prayer! Excellently crafted, dear Pintu. Your love for your God glows through each and every line. Each of us IS the light and the light comes from inside each and every one of us, it is not found outside of us. As your poem so poetically says, the light glows through our face to be seen by all. Outstanding write! Thank you for sharing, dear friend...
    April 20,2017 at 11: 22pm

    Ephrem Yigletu: ...See birth after birth
    With light
    For you too dear
    Beautiful pen
    We also feel
    How hot
    And how deep
    You sink
    And float
    Within the love
    As a dove
    To show your light

    Beautiful pen
    April 21,2017 at 3: 57am

    Rohan Guarda: Beautiful penning...and a very beautiful picture
    April 21,2017 at 4: 47am

    Sharon Greenwell Gurley: Beautiful, you always let your inner light glow so brightly. God Bless
    April 21,2017 at 7: 16am

    Sylvia Frances Chan: You conjured magic with your five quatrains, Dr. Pintu Mahakul. A constant flow of devotional light in your poetry, only you could create a magnificent poem like this, the greatest Bliss in all what you possess.This picture of you and that light reminds me of the Dutch famous painter of the Dutch Golden Age. His earliest paintings were also oft shadowed with a shining golden light reflected in a face.This is really amazing. In the world of painters, I know every dust they have spread with their tassel. This photograph of you, is mesmerizingly beautiful.Your smiling appearance goes excellently with the surrounds. A warmest atmosphere and a fantastic poetry presentation with a golden lining. My grandest compliments, Pintu!
    April 21,2017 at 7: 51am

    Jane Taylor Hardy: Dr. Pintu Mahakul you are an inspiration to me!
    April 21,2017 at 9: 08am

    Pintu Mahakul: Thank you Suraj Prakash Choudhury, my friend for supportive and encouraging feedback on my poem in 2015. Thank you very much my friend Sandeep Panda for your visit to this poem in 2015 and for encouraging words. Thank you very much Ency Bearis sir for your kind feedback on my poem. Thank you very much Flossy McGowan for visiting this poem and giving your kind opinion. Thank you very much Rene Scott, my friend for visiting this poem and giving your supportive and encouraging feedback. Thank you very much Mike Hauser sir for your visit to this poem and for kind feedback. Thank you very much Jerome E. Ellis Jr., my friend for encouraging comment. Thank you very much Aidyl Sireab madam for your visit to this poem and kind opinion. Thank you very much my brother Soumya Ranjan Meher for kind feedback. Thank you very much Jarid Miller, my friend for your uplifting and encouraging feedback. I am deeply touched by your kind words. Thank you very much Ronell Warren, my brother for encouraging feedback on my poem. Thank you very much Bipin Churchung Rabha for your supportive words. Thank you Dr. Chinmay Guru guru for your kind visit to this poem and for uplifting feedback. Thank you Marie Shine madam for your deep and encouraging feedback on my poem. Thank you Ephrem Yigletu, my friend for your beautiful and poetic feedback. This is very heart touching. Thank you Dr. Rohan Guarda for visiting this poem and giving your kind feedback. Thank you very much Sharon Greenwell Gurley madam for your nice visit to my poem and for your kind opinion that encourages a lot to glow with inner light. Thank you very much Sylvia Frances Chan madam for visiting this poem of light and giving your brief, fabulous and heart touching feedback. Thank you also for giving information about Dutch famous painter of the Dutch Golden Age and reminding us for light of success. Thank you Jane Taylor Hardy madam for your visit to my poem and giving your encouraging opinion. I thank you all fellow poet friends and visitors who have visited this, liked, loved and read this poem in this page. May God bring happiness for you all.
    April 21,2017 at 3: 55pm

    Sharon Greenwell Gurley: You are welcome Pintu and my God bring you much happiness also.
    April 21,2017 at 4: 25pm

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  • WriteBeLight

    Such a beautiful picture and message Pintu, and wonderful commentary. Thanks for posting. 🙂



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